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Accomplishment-Oriented Résumés Get Results!
by Sharla Taylor

Your résumé is a marketing tool to sell a product--you! Like any advertisement, a well-written résumé must entice the reader to buy the product. In this case, you want the employer to offer you an interview. Your job search documents (résumé, references, and cover letters) must show you in the best possible light. Just as there are truth in advertising laws, there is a universal law of résumé writing--always tell the truth.

When writing your objective statement, keep the employer's needs in mind, "Ask not what the company can do for you; state clearly what you can do for the company." Read your entire résumé from the employer's perspective. Answer the employer's questions about your education, experience, and accomplishments.

Your résumé is more than words on paper; it is a snapshot of who you are and what you have to offer an employer. Don't allow your résumé to be boring; create interest and draw the reader's attention to your unique skills and experience. Accomplishment-oriented résumés capture the person behind the paper and increase your odds of gaining an interview because your résumé answers the "So what?" question about your achievements.

Weed out extraneous data. Avoid the "T.M.I.Trap" … Too Much Information can be a turn-off. Hiring managers are busy people who generally take a no-nonsense approach to finding a suitable candidate to interview. Don't waste their time by including irrelevant personal information. Who cares if you can belch "Jingle Bells" while juggling bananas, or if you can play "Chopsticks" with your big toes on a toy piano? Although, I'll admit these are amazing accomplishments; they are trivial. Unless you are seeking a job as a comedian, it is not likely that these skills would be used in your next position. Don't describe nontransferable skills in detail. Slant your résumé to appeal to your future employer by including only those accomplishments that are suited for the position you are seeking. Here's a question that can act as acid test when reviewing your accomplishments, "Is this accomplishment meaningful, measurable, and marketable?" If it is not, revise it or omit it.

Market yourself wisely. Keep your résumé focused on one objective statement. If you have skills in diverse fields such as teaching and direct sales, you may need two résumés, one targeted for a teaching position and one for a sales representative's position. However, your ability to make presentations to a large group is a transferable skill that should be included in both résumés.

Use the P.A.R. approach to describe your accomplishments. State the problem; describe the action that you took to solve the problem and the results of your action. Whenever possible, anchor these results to specific dollar amounts or percentages of increase in productivity/profitability. You have only a short time to impress your reader. Remember, résumés that are too vague are only seconds away from the trash can.

In an interview questionnaire I use in my résumé writing business, a secretary included "given the responsibility of throwing papers away" as one of her accomplishments. I wasn't impressed. A chimpanzee with a wad of paper can score two points in the basketball bin. Please don't get me wrong; I have the utmost respect for professional secretaries; in fact, I worked as a secretary for many years. This person's accomplishment, as it was written, didn't pass the "so-what" test. However, when she elaborated and described how, as an administrative assistant, she was given the autonomous responsibility of purging and archiving project files--that was impressive, because it conveyed a measure of trust bestowed upon her by her supervisor. Do employers want to hire someone who can make decisions within their realm of responsibility? You bet! Caution: choose your words carefully, or you might as well start training your toes to play "Chopsticks."

If you are overwhelmed at the task of writing your own résumé, enlist the help of a professional résumé writer. A skilled wordsmith can ensure your résumé makes a better first impression by improving the overall format, wording, and presentation of your job search documents. Regardless of whether you decide to do-it-yourself or hire a writer, don't depend on your software's spell-checker to catch all the mistakes in your job search documents. Case in point: I once wrote a résumé for an attractive young woman who was a recent college graduate; her expertise was public relations. Much to my embarrassment, there was a terrible typo that spell-checker overlooked; I'd left the "L" out of the word "public." Fortunately, we caught the mistake before the résumé was sent. It is wise to have several trusted friends review your résumé before sending it. Not only will they pick up on any typos you may have overlooked, but they may think of other skills and accomplishments that you may have failed to mention.

Upon reviewing a web designer's self-written résumé, a friend pointed out that the web designer had listed all his technical skills but glossed over his project management experience, which excluded his greatest strength--the ability to lead a project from concept to completion. His ability to communicate with clients, co-workers, and corporate executives in the course of project development and implementation was the "trump card" that he had failed to play. The web designer recruited the help of a professional résumé writer (yours truly) to reword his accomplishments to include the project scope and size, the number of people managed on the project team, and the direct benefits the client derived from project implementation. The response from the rewrite was favorable, and the web designer began to gain interviews. Accomplishment-oriented résumés get results.

For more ideas and information on writing about your professional accomplishments, visit www.writtenbyapro.com. The related links page contains many resources for job seekers.

Copyright © 2002 by Sharla Taylor All rights reserved.

This article originally appeared on ChristianJobs.com and can be found in their archives. A series of similar articles for nurses on professional portfolios, as well as résumé and cover letter preparation can be found with the following links:

Your Professional Portfolio: Don't Leave Home Without It
http://allnurses.com/a/t.cgi?portfolio

The Case for a Professional Résumé
http://allnurses.com/a/t.cgi?resume

Accomplishment-Oriented Résumés Get Results
http://allnurses.com/a/t.cgi?aoresume

"Mission Possible: Increase Your Interview Opportunities with an
Effective Cover Letter,"
http://www.allnurses.com/Nurse-zine/Articles/coverletter.shtml

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Sharla Taylor is a Christian freelance writer and owner of an online résumé writing service www.athomewithwords.com that assists people with the preparation of their job search documents. Sharla enjoys helping people through career transitions and views her career as a ministry. She encourages those who are spiritually seeking to build a relationship with God and seek His purpose for their lives. Contact her via email writtenbyapro@msn.com.


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